The feedback that I received was pretty much consistent with what I received after the second elevator pitch. The biggest concern I've received from people now is the color scheme, and I should change it from just black, white and gray to something that encourages the website to be a little more dynamic. As I move forward I want to not only change the color scheme but also the logo. To me there is something I can use that has more meaning to the idea of making progress than a lion.
Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rQGIXgHloNg
Oliver,
ReplyDeleteI really like your idea and it really interested me. Your elevator pitch was good and I liked how you kept it short, concise, yet very informative. From the view point of an investor I definitely feel like I had all of my questions on the project and its progress answered. I like how you also talked about how you plan to make changes to the overall color scheme and logos because this shows progression and further forward movement which is a large part of what the investors want. When you get a chance check out my elevator pitch and give me some feedback to help me progress my idea. http://chrispate25.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
I liked that your pitch didn't drag on. You did a good job explaining and covering all aspects of your idea. I think that it is also great that you have already thought about changing the color scheme. I agree that the logo could be better and connect more to the idea. I think that changing these components would be a great start to attracting investors and people to your business. http://meganerobb.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
ReplyDeleteHi Oliver,
ReplyDeleteI also enjoyed how straightforward your pitch was and it was pretty informative for the time that was allotted for this assignment. I feel like the changes that you have made and are thinking about implementing are all valid efforts to better the concept and I believe that this is something that has a lot of potential.
Here is a link to my blog: http://breyflynch.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html